Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Quicky Post

Work is crazy due to pencil week(s), and so, I have little time to post. But, here are (look at what happens to you when you're surrounded by English people) the raw data:

I am at 46,957 words.
Tonight is the last night to write.
This means I have 3,043 words to go.

Ta da!

Monday, November 28, 2005

Post Turkey Lethargy

So, we're in the home stretch. Three more days to go.

Over the holidays, I didn't get as much done as I would've liked, but I'm still pretty sure I'll make it. We're at 39,458 which means I have 10,542 to go over three days. This further translates to 3,514 words a day. It's a push, but I think I'll make it.

We have reached the skipping around point. I'm jumping around to write the scenes that I know I want to have and leaving out the bridging scenes. Plot wise, however, at this point I think I'm over half way through really. So, honestly, if I do the rest of the high points over the next three days, I might be to the point that I need to sit down and work out what I need to go in between them and cut it down. I think my 90,000 word estimate is too long for the story I want to tell. I can also tell that it needs more super powers scenes. It's important to the story, but it hasn't shown up as much as I want it to.

But, in honor of being in the last week of Nanunanu I give you:

Superhero or cleaner?

I scored 15 out of 20.

Tuesday, November 22, 2005

Pre Holidays

Well, for a brief update, I didn't end up bouncing around. Or, at least, I haven't yet. I'm not sure that I shouldn't, but I keep coming up with what I think should happen next, so I keep on going. I need to do something to get into the story again, though, because the characters are starting to get boring. Again with the shelf life.

I'm now at 29,291. Just shy of the big 30K. With almost exactly a week left to go. On a regular week, the individual word count would be doable. Just under 3,000 words per day. Which is good.

The down side is, after I decided to jump on the NaNo train, the family (in this case consisting of around 8 eaters) decided that for Thanksgiving my house is going to serve as the point of consumption. Squeek!!!

First, we have to figure out where everyone is going to sit. This will involve the importation of a second table as well as many chairs from my mother's house. Normally, we'd eat at her house because she has a table that seats 12. However, she's getting new cabinets tomorrow, we all hope, and so her house will smell like paint. Not to mention the fact that she's in the middle of doing the family taxes, and I am not going to be the one to suggest that she clean up all the paperwork she's got spread out over the 12-person table for us to eat on it.

So, now, rather than having an extended weekend where I can just go somewhere and eat after cooking a little bit and then coming home and writing, the hordes are descending on my house which hasn't been cleaned all month because I've been doing Nanunanu. (Not that this is necessarily very different than normal in all truth.)

Will I be able to get my writing time in and clean the house and organize a three course mean for 8? Will my book get finished on time? Will my sanity survive? Tune in over the holidays to see what happens!

Friday, November 18, 2005

Half Way There

Well, last night we broke past the 25,000 mile marker. I ended up at 26,540 after going in and working on one of the scenes I'd skipped the day before.

I think we've reached the hopscotch stage of our writing process. Normally, I don't write things in order. I have a really detailed outline and I end up jumping around and writing scenes to suit whatever mood I'm in that day. With this book, since I don't have the detailed outline, I'd kind of been sticking to linear progression as I got to different scenes.

Due to the CLUNK phase I'm at, I think I might skip on to where some of the action happens and come back in and fill in with the information I need to get across when I get to the end. We'll see how writing goes this weekend and if I end up needing to bump over a couple weeks to be more interested again.

Thursday, November 17, 2005

A Watery Grave

The title sounds a little more dramatic than necessary, but I wanted to use it so there it is. I got my pages in last night, though only the 2,100 mark rather than the higher final goal mark. I actually had more done than I remembered, so when I got done and was only 800 away from hitting 25,000 total, I tried to figure out if I had it in me to push thorough to get there. But, I couldn't. I was tapped out.

I'm still kind of waffly on what I'm doing next in the plot. I'm at the draggy spot. The spot for me where I'm (book length wise) 1/4 of the way there, and things are just supposed to be picking up for the characters as they are on that part of the roller coaster where you here the CLUNK CLUNK CLUNK noise, and you know you're getting up to the summit where you really start rolling through the big hills and get to the loopy thing at the end and then go backwards. But you're at the CLUNK, so it's a little slow, and the anticipation is building, and you feel like you're being pulled backward down the hill.

Now, as a reader and a roller coaster rider, that's a fun part. You know there's something coming, you can feel the gravity trying to work against you and you know that you're going to beat it and zip around in just a minute. But as a writer, I always feel stalled. It's prelim, setup, and mechanics. We've loaded the passengers into the cars, they've strapped in, they're committed now to going on the ride whether they start to scream profanity at the end and wish they hadn't or not. But, important as it is, it's also just a little boring to write.

"As they ascended the hill, it gave them just enough time to think about their grocery list and all the bills that were waiting for them at home... all those things that were why they shouldn't be on this roller coaster. All the things waiting for them at the end. The chain underneath kept turning. Turning. Pulling them towards the top."

Or something.

I think I need to move some scenes up, and I think I know which scenes they are. So that'll help a little. Toss in some villainy or something.

Wednesday, November 16, 2005

Son of Cold

Return of Cold wasn't going to be a strong enough title, so I went for the next level. What I thought was getting better instead got much much worse, resulting in a croaky Elly who sounded very much like a frog and spent four days lying on the couch alternately watching GTA San Andreas being played, Miami Vice on DVD, and Buffy on DVD. As well as some interspersed episodes of So Graham Norton on video.

Unfortunately, most laugh out loud comedies were out because when I started to laugh, it resulted in a paralyzing coughing fit that then lasted the next few minutes. I hate being sick. So, Monday after being sick for five days, I caved and called the doctor and had her call in antibiotics, which I also hate. Lesser of two evils.

So, now I'm back at work and drugged. And severely behind on my word count.

I did my work on Thursday, though I don't remember what the word count was. Sunday I again did some work, though I only hit 1500ish, not even the shorter goal. Which brings us to 20,500 or there abouts.

Yesterday was the half way point, meaning that I should've been at 25,000. Obviously, not so much. I am not, however, far enough behind that I've lost hope. Just far enough behind to be annoyed.

On the other hand, at 20K, I'm only at the end of chapter 4. With a 20 chapter projection, at the apparent average of 5K a chapter, that'd put us up at around 100K for final product. Now, before Diana cries, that's first draft length. I think there's some stuff in there that in the long run I'll decide to whack out. Plus, the scenes are rambling, I think. Or at least I feel like they're rambling a little. But I want to get the whole thing done and then mess around with pacing afterwards. I might be leading a little too much, I can't tell. Some of the stuff might be there because I need to know what happens and the reader really doesn't but since I didn't outline, it's getting written anyway. We'll see in the end.

I did write the big first arc climax scene(s) on Thursday though, so that was kind of nice. They need a ton of work, but that's fine by me. They'll get it when it's their turn.

So. For further projections:

If I want to finish up the whole shooting match by the end of the month I now need to step it up to almost 5000 words a day. 4964 to be exact. Not that it couldn't happen, but I don't think it's likely to in all honesty.

For my NaNoWriMo goal, I need to do 2107 a day. That I think is doable.

Things I've learned about myself so far, though, include that I don't write well on weekends. There's too much going on at my house for me to be able to get much done. We have people over a lot, so there are generally guests, and I tend to feel rude if I'm writing off in a corner in the office when the husband is entertaining. It's a southern thing, I think. Not that I haven't done it, there've been a couple nights during the week when we've had people over that I've just gone in for an hour and done my words for the night and then come out. But, I don't think I get the high return there, I cruise through what I need to and quit. So, in the future, I should probably not plan on getting in writing on Friday and Saturday. Sunday is okay because we tend to have a chunk of the day at home alone before people come over.

So far, apart from the day of waffle about where I was going next in my bridging scenes, the looser outline has worked fine. So I might be able to back off a little on my prewriting anxiety and go with the flow a little more as long as I know where I'm flowing to next. Though, I do have a big thing coming up that I have no idea how I'm going to do. It could be fun to figure out, I might freak out. We'll see in the next day or so.

I don't write much when I'm sick. This is where the not planning writing on weekends will save my bacon in the long run, I think. If something comes up during the week where it's just not happening, I have the option of making up the words on the weekend. Though, there's a chance that that's just enough rope to hang myself with.

I'm apparently very motivated by numbers and competition. So, I should try and find someone else who's going to be a quick burn writer so that we can pit ourselves against each other in a battle to the finish line. I haven't found one yet. Of the 6 other people that I started NaNoWriMo with, all but two have at this point dropped out (I think). The numbers thing has helped, though. There have been several days that I think if I wasn't pushing for NaNoWriMo I would've gotten nothing done.

Tonight, I'm going to try and get in a chunk. That may depend on how badly the heater blew things all over the house today, however, as my husband had to come and stay up at my office and let the house air out. A great deal of vacuuming might be in my future.

Friday, November 11, 2005

Transformations

So, the cold almost bested me again last night, but didn't. I ended up clocking in 1,780. I did two of the most important scenes in the book, and I don't think I'm going to end up being really happy with them in the long run because (as evidenced by word count) they're really short. But, that's okay. I can go in and edit them up later.

I started to do a different scene before them and realized that I needed to figure out which play Tilly was going to be in in the book. Go to bookshelves... nothing there but Ren Drama. Well. One Tennessee Williams play and a short three person play by someone I don't remember in a general lit anthology. Nope.

So, I decided that I'd do some searching this morning when I got to work to figure that out. It was going to be hard to do the audition scene and not know what she was auditioning for. Much less what she was in during the rest of the book. I figured it'd take me a while to come up with because I wanted something that was going to relate to the themes of the book. Something with a smaller cast, not Shakespeare, and kind of subtle.

The next step was to try and think of how to search for that on Google. Which lead me to thinking of synonyms for my themes. Transformation... metamorphosis... And then I had it. No searching required. Zimmerman's Metamorphoses. It is absolutely perfect. I mean, perfect perfect. You'd think I'd thought of the play and then thought of the story perfect. I'm tickled.

Thursday, November 10, 2005

Stupid Cold

It bested me last night. The cold. I had an ouchy throat, and a cough, and was sleepy. So, instead of doing what a good girl should have, I went and got my blankie off the bed and watched my husband roll pimps on GTA San Andreas. And fell asleep through most of it. Though, I did pretty well at the dance competition when he handed me the controller in a fit of frustration.

The good news, though, is that I'm having writing withdrawl today. Hopefully that means that I'm getting into the characters and the plot, not that I'm feaverish. But, have cough drops will travel. We've got a friend coming over tonight to help finally close the pool, I want to try and catch Sky High before it leaves the dollar movie, and then for to write. Or, if the pool closing goes quickly, between the closing the pool and going to the movie for to write.

Today also marks the 1/3 point for Nanunanu. Towards my 50K goal, I'm at 37%. So that's good. Towards my 90K goal, 21%. Not too bad, but not great either. Hopefully I'll be able to do some chugging this weekend.

Wednesday, November 09, 2005

Week Two

I think what they say about week two is right. It's hard to get myself down in front of the computer to come up with what I need to. It's also hard because I'm coming down with a cold that's made my throat all scratchy and sore and given me coughing fits. So mostly what I want to do is curl up with a book and a blankie.

But, yesterday I did at least get my minimum page count in at 1,915. I also realized a flaw in the timing I was using for some major events so I've bumped things around. I think it'll work, though. So that's good. I'm going to at least get my minimum pages in tonight and then see how I'm feeling.

The pool still isn't closed. That'll be a trick. :P

Tuesday, November 08, 2005

Bridging

I did look over my wall and end up figuring out what I needed to put in between the scene I was working on last and the next thing I have up on the board. I think I have another spot to fill before I'm ready for the audition scene coming up next. Probably something else with the drama story arc or something. I am planning on keeping with the loose outline rather than going for something more definite, though, I think it's good for my brain.

I got 3,270 words down last night. So, that got me to 16,900 which is 1/3 of the way done with the NaNoWriMo goal. Tonight I'll break 17,000. Wheee!

Monday, November 07, 2005

Mega Catch-Up Post

Since I've got so much to catch up on with my dailies, I will break them down here.

Thursday:

I logged my requisite word count on Thursday, which should have gone in a Friday post but I didn't have time before I had to leave work. I clocked 3,125 words, bringing my total up to 8,526 at that point.

I did the post-it note workshop (which I'll elaborate on if people want) with heavy modification, and ended up with my outline on the wall in a space of about six feet by four feet. It's neat. I can go stand in front of it and see everything at once. In the last two outlines I've done, I went in and mapped out each scene in each chapter. So, I had a long synopsis before I ever sat down to write the book. As previously documented, the first one wasn't very good and the second never got finished owing to plot problems.

So, after lamenting my unfinished outline for a few days but still getting writing done, I realized that maybe my wall outline was good enough. I have the major points in order, I've tied up all my plots on there so I don't have loose ends hanging out there, and I've handled character development and continuity with the way it's put together. So, if I'm adlibbing the scenes between those, maybe that's okay and it'll keep it more fresh as I'm writing. I decided to leave it that way for a bit and see how it goes. I can always fill in more details if I need to, but maybe I won't get as burnt out on it before I finish.

Friday:

The day of pool closing. Since it's unseasonably warm here (it was in the 80s on Friday) we were going to take advantage of that fact and close the pool without freezing our fingers and toes off. We got started, but my brother was already conscripted on another project and it's just not a job you can do with two people. So, I spent all afternoon working on that and then needed to take him to pick up his girlfriend. Whose birthday was Friday, and so then there was the dinner eating and talking. And I was POOPED. However, I'd kind of anticipated not getting my writing done on Friday and Saturday and working on it on Sunday in a big chunk.

Saturday:

The day of the family birthday. And more pool closing. The brother's girlfriend (BGF) had said that for her birthday she really wanted to do something all together with my family, which my family liked the idea of since we don't get to do stuff together very often. So, we planned a surprise sushi making class at my mom's since a friend of mine used to be a sushi chef and knows all the tricks. Saturday afternoon was supposed to be the day of going to the store and doing the pre-cooking things like cutting veggies and then the rolling would commence at dinner time.

Except the pool closing wasn't done. So, I got up at 7:30am to start working on the pool, and did that until it was time to go to the store at noon. Then with the cooking and cleaning from the cooking and eating the cooking, I didn't get home until after 11pm. No writing getting done.

Sunday:

Still no brother to help with pool. More pool closing work to do. So, we worked more on closing the pool and getting what we could done from about 10am until 4pm. This made for a very sore me, since that's three days in a row of bending over and fishing through water that's cold even though the weather on the top of the water was warm. Nobody to help cover pool, no pool covering happened.

But, I did sit down to start writing at 4ish. To find that my computer will only operate in safe mode. So, I ran through bunches of stuff like disk cleanup and defrag (after backing up my WIP) which meant that the writing part didn't actually start until 6:30pm. So much for the afternoon of writing. So, my 9,000 word goal didn't get reached. But, I did knock out 5,104 of them, bringing my total to 13,630. That caught me up on the minimum goal per day that will get me to the end of the NaNoWriMo event, but not for my longer goal.

I'm less confident with my loose outline plan now, though. I'm at a spot where if I continue to write chronologically, I'm not sure how I want to get from where I am to my next spot. I might just shift some things around instead, I haven't decided yet. Maybe it's just a good time to poke at the outline in the next section and see what it's going to do.

We'll see where we end up tonight.

Thursday, November 03, 2005

Magic Numbers

Well, last night I made myself sit down and do my full page count even though I still haven't gotten my outline to where I'd like it to be. But, there are several places that I know what has to happen so I figured I'd just jump in and write those until I do. I probably have enough to get me through the weekend.

I ended up doing my 3000 words and bumping over on to a 12th page, but of course I left my notebook at home. I know it was 34-- so, I figured for the moment I'd just make my total 5432 for symmetry. It'll all come out in the wash at the end.

Wednesday, November 02, 2005

The Journey Begins

Alright, we've made it through day one. I actually did get some pages in, even though I still haven't completely finished my outline.

I have a good rough outline in place, and I'm going to work more on it tonight to try and fill it in and polish it up. But, I got enough of it done last night that I could go ahead and start. The beginning isn't going to change, I knew where I had to start the story, so I went ahead and got a jump on it.

I also figured out my page/word count breakdowns for the month. My actual goal is a 90,000 word novel because I just think that 50,000 isn't going to give me enough length to tell the story with the subplots that I have going. I'd really like to get all 90,000 done this month, so we'll see if that's possible.

To just meet the Nanunanu challenge, I'll need to do around 1,667 words per day, which for me translates into around 6 pages. That's probably not going to be a problem for me because I tend to write pretty quickly on a first draft. So that's my base goal that I'm going to push to meet every day no matter what.

For my 90,000 word novel goal, it'll need to be 3,000 words per day with no weekends off, yielding around 11 pages every day. I think I can manage that if I push. Ten pages a day during the week was my standard goal when I was working on my last novel, but I tended not to work on weekends. If I do weekends, I should be able to make it. And since the whole point is to push yourself, I'm going to try and do that.

Last night, I didn't actually get to start writing until after 11pm. But! I got my pages in. I ended up at 1989 words and 7 pages for the first scene even though I got started late. Diana still beat me. :P But that's okay, I'll catch up!

Tuesday, November 01, 2005

The Big Day

It's arrived. The first day of NaNoWriMo (or, as Jana's calling it Nanunanu, which is I think going to stick for me).

I'm still outlining, I didn't manage to finish that up yesterday. I did get started, though, which is something.

I did some fun stuff today, though, at work that's going to help me out. I made pictures of my characters using the Hero Machine 2.0 which is quite the little gizmo. I came up with illustrations for Tilly, Em, and Pete. Unfortunately there wasn't an evil scientist option for a costume, so I had to leave off our villain. That's okay, though, I don't know that it matters all that much.






I also made myself a little superhero icon to get myself through the long days at work and remind me what I'm supposed to do at home. She's got a little dragon sidekick and everything. It's quite cool.




So, tonight more of the same. Except now with writing! I'm going to try and get through at least a couple pages worth to start my little word count ticker a buzzing.